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Have you ever had a dream?
Something you really want to come true?
And then have it happen?
Well I have. And I feel...
Odd.
Empty.
Unsatisfied.
Irritated.
Changed.
It's not how I wanted it to feel.
And it's not a perfect situation.
And I have learned that sometimes,
Things can't work out.
And that is for the best.
Something you really want to come true?
And then have it happen?
Well I have. And I feel...
Odd.
Empty.
Unsatisfied.
Irritated.
Changed.
It's not how I wanted it to feel.
And it's not a perfect situation.
And I have learned that sometimes,
Things can't work out.
And that is for the best.
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Note me on what's going on hon 
I liked the poem, but the beginning of every few 'sentence' with "And" repeated was a bit choppy. Aside from that, the meaning came across like a razor blade. Sharp and accurate to the point.
I liked the poem, but the beginning of every few 'sentence' with "And" repeated was a bit choppy. Aside from that, the meaning came across like a razor blade. Sharp and accurate to the point.